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Yearning for the lie by ~JaJeMalory98:iconJaJeMalory98:



Yearning for the Lie:

I want you here beside me,
I want you to look at me,
I want to be the only one to savor-
Your smiles, your laughter and your pain,
I want to be the only one who can-
Torture you, touch you, kiss you,
Be mine and mine alone.

Life is but a cruel fate for us,
But, please,
Can’t we move away-
From this turbulent Society,
Life in a delusion,
Is my preferable illusion.

Please don’t leave, just yet,
Because without you,
I know not who I am,
I will fall,
Like a fluttering leaf,
In the face of this storm.

©2008-2009 ~JaJeMalory98
:iconjajemalory98:

Author's Comments

A short poem and pretty much drivel(about an overly written topic) I know, but comes straight from the heart. The words may not mean anything to you but to me they speak of the deep pain I feel right now. No rhyme formation in the one. All comments are appreciated.

Dedicated to: that someone special.

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:iconhimanshu-kapoor:
society is singular... so using these before it is void... use this instead

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Love the sinner, hate the sin. Appreciate people for who they are.

$himanshu-kapoor
:iconjajemalory98:
Ah, thank you for so "kindly" pointing it out for me, for I was not aware of the mistake when I replaced a former word(that didn't quite fit and was too redudant for such a short poem)with the word "Society". As always, your "insight" is much appreciated.
:iconhimanshu-kapoor:
always glad to help you out anytime
















except weekends

--
Love the sinner, hate the sin. Appreciate people for who they are.

$himanshu-kapoor
:iconhellishchaos:
My English sucks, but also in Italian ther's no word for describe it... All I can say is "beautiful"

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è il bacio della notte che ti strappa l'anima dolcemente
è il bacio della notte che ti uccide lentamente, passando cuore e anima a filo di spada...
su queste tue labbra dannate sta la mia maledizione,
vittima e carnefice stanno danzando insieme...
:iconjajemalory98:
uh.... I'm glad you like it ^^;

Thanks for the comment and fav!:hug:

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